I'm trying to write my fanfic in third person now. I've redesigned a character or two, my main problem is coming up with a decent outfit for my main character.
If you have any suggestions on the outfit or anything story wise just tell me.


Chapter Eight: The missionChapter EightChapter Eight: The mission
I let out a yawn as I sat up in my bed and stared out the window with bits of my hair dangling in my eyes. I brushed my hair back and hopped out of bed. I got dressed and ate, running out the door before I could get smothered by a Hinata hug. I found Naomi walking out of the flower shop and I hopped down from the roof and landed beside her with a loud, Hi! She let out a small Eep! and then glared at me. Not funny, Shadow. I smirked. We then made our way to the Mission reception room. Bakura was standing by our sensei. She was wearing her usual knee length


Chapter sevenChapter SevenChapter seven
My vision blurred in and out as I opened my eyes to find that I was in my room. It was dark. I then felt a drop of icy water run down my face. I turned my head to see my mother, Hinata, sitting next to the bed holding an icepack to the top of my head. When she saw that I was awake she smiled, Hey sleepy head. I tried to sit up but she placed her other hand on my chest and pushed me back gently. Rest, youve got quite a nasty bump on your head. I slowly reached up. I barely even touched the enormous goose-egg before pain erupted through my head. I let out a groan. She smiled


Chapter 6Chapter 6: The testChapter 6
WHAT!?! We yelled. We were all on our feet, shack-jawed and eyes wide. I try to say something but Naomi beat me to it. Youre saying if one of us fail your test, they will never get another chance? She nodded, that smile still on her lips. Thats right. Thats freaking insane. I yelled.
Bakura held up his hand and said, Hold it! Naomi and I stopped and turned towards him. We dont even know what this is, so shut up. He was right. We were acting like idiots. His eyes shift to the sile


Chapter FiveChapter 5: Akuma KasumiChapter Five
I woke up the next day and found myself back up in my room. I guess Naruto carried me up here. I sat up, yawned, and stretched. I stood up, walked over to my dresser and picked up my headband and tied it around my head. Next I pulled on a black short sleeve shirt and then pulled on a pair of black and red sleeves that went from my wrists to my elbows. I grabbed my kunai pouch, belted it to my leg and walked down the stairs.
As I walked into the kitchen, I look around. No one was home. I walk to the table to find a small note lying in the center. I pick it up. It read, Gone to town.
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